Thursday, May 9, 2013

Critical Preface

            Before I enrolled in Writing for the Mass Media, my experience and knowledge with writing news articles was limited to the guesswork, luck, and patient copyeditor, Fran, which carried me through my internship. I enjoyed the opportunity to actually learn the fundamentals to this kind of writing; any sort of practice writing succinct, concise statements rather than lengthy academic prose is certainly worthwhile practice for me. As a senior and an aspiring journalist, I needed preparation for the real world of media writing, and I think that the class did. At the very least, I have learned that advertising and Public Relations is not the field that I should delve into…ever.

            Each of the assignments involved types of writing that I had not previously encountered. The Public Relations pieces certainly pushed all my comfort levels. I have never written press releases, but I think that I developed the three topics well and followed the general guidelines found in our class text. My goal was to make them as interesting as I could without over-doing the releases; I know how dull it is to read a dry press release. As for the print advertisement, I did my best but I know that it is not worth actual use. Advertisements are a particularly hard concept for me to grasp, and so I am not proud of the work, but I hope it meets the goals of the assignment. My creativity comes through writing, not visuals.

            The group PR work was a fun and challenging experience. I am naturally a person prefers solo work before group projects, but the experience proved that group collaboration creates fantastic pieces of work. The editorial, brochure, and broadcast probably would not have been as well done as they are if our group had not done them together. We blasted through the goals of the assignment and produced pieces worthy of any portfolio.
 
            I do not think that I have written a feature story before the media class. It was certainly difficult for me to decide upon a topic, and even more difficult for me to narrow down exactly how to approach it once I decided. The kind of news that is reported and the kind of news that should be reported is a topic that I have thought about for a very long time, and I was glad to have the chance to write my opinions. I think that I did fairly well on this assignment; it was closer to the kind of writing I am used to and that I like, so it was just easier overall.

            The projects taught me much about what I should expect – or what I may be subjected to – should I break into the journalism world. I am glad to have experience constructing so many different kinds of pieces, and I think that I met the requirements well. My portfolio reflects my interests as well as pieces that push the boundaries of my previous experience, and is a worthy compilation.

Feature


Desire and Necessity: Reporters Contend with Two Evils

 

What does the audience want to read?

A question posed each day by newspaper editors and reporters alike, readership retention and interest is top priority among print media moguls watching their industry fall apart. Understandably, newspaper editors request that reporters propose stories of intrigue and interest to the general public – an audience interested in the story subjects will likely purchase and read the newspaper. 

Yes, people like humorous and heartwarming stories of humans doing good deeds or when dogs save lives; throw a tragic story into the mix and newspapers will disappear from the shelves. But do we really know what the entire audience wants to read? Or do we focus on one type of reader, and hope that they will suffice?

My own adventures into the field as an intern for the Utica Observer-Dispatch revealed that newspapers often do not appeal to the low-income district, people who do not care whatsoever about the latest additions to the city zoo. People from the low-income district want to know about actual change in the “slums” of the city, or at least why change does not come. Reporters quickly cover the events that attract attention – tragic shootings, huge drug busts, and jaw-dropping scandals – but attention needs to be brought to the corruption, the dangers, and the lack of change that happens in every city, not just the “what” but the “why” as well.

Herein lays the problem: editors and publishers desperately want to – and need to – produce news that the audience wants to read. However, there are multiple audiences in each city, and newspapers have difficulty reaching separate audiences.


Kris Worrell, editor of the Utica Observer-Dispatch, emphasizes the need to keep the audience happy. Every day, she asks her staff: “What does our audience want to see?” Based upon the stories found in local papers across the United States, many editors seem to think that the audiences’ desires are obvious, that a cover of the local fire truck exhibition or a cute report on children petting exotic animals balances the tragic news that often appears on the front page.

Utica is not the only small city in which the local newspaper slights the low income population. Shootings, robberies, and rapes in the low income district of any metropolitan area often go unnoticed by the larger public, and newspapers rarely report on the death of a poor boy from the “wrong side of town.” But if the incident somehow involves a prominent community member and becomes public knowledge, in that case the poor boy’s tragic death captures community sympathy in an instant.

It cannot be a call for only “happy” news; people love to read tragedies. Perhaps budget cuts and the consequential size restrictions or lack of reporters limits the number of stories brought to the paper. Or, maybe the important thing is not the audiences’ happiness, but the power of city authorities who want to have control over the way the newspaper represents the city. In an age where newspapers are “dying out,” we cannot eliminate the idea that money, power, and favors do not exist together in the realm of free speech.

 But why can’t reporters cover the news that the audience needs to read?

             Affluent districts need to know about the struggles of the less affluent. We cannot foster change within communities without the knowledge that things are wrong in the first place. I do not mean superficial knowledge – of course there are problems in every community, of course there are things that can change. I mean the conscious knowledge of people concerned with the well-being of others and the drive to witness and enforce positive change, particularly among the youth.

             Realistically, not every incident can be reported on. And sometimes, the community wants to revel in events that uplift morale and spirit – the enjoyment and celebration of “happy” events is perfectly acceptable. Humanity needs to know that good things happen.

            But, ultimately, do newspapers have a responsibility to report news that the public wants to read or needs to read? Reporters have the ability to voice concern about the atrocities of society each day, even the smallest ones; I think it is time that we re-learn how to use that voice, to let it bellow across communities until change is reality.

 

                      

 

 

 

 

Press Releases


Wells Tennis Return to Clarks Summit


They did it again!

Wells College sends a record-breaking team to the North Eastern Athletic Conference tennis finals for the second year in a row. The women’s team destroyed the Keuka Storm last Sunday in a 7-2 victory and slipped past Penn State Harrisburg for the third seed ranking.

Last year, the team qualified for the finals and entered the tournament as the first seed, but lost in the championship round to Penn State Berks by a 5-4 margin. The women

The Express enters the finals as the lone New York team, behind Penn State Berks at first seed and Penn State Abington at second. Penn State Harrisburg follows Wells as the fourth seed.

The two-day tennis action consists of a team tournament and an individual singles and doubles tournament. Wells proudly sends each member of the tennis team to the individual tournament as well as the team finals. Each of the three doubles teams qualified, and five out of six singles players will battle for individual titles.

Team play begins Saturday, April 27 at the Birchwood Tennis Club in Clarks Summit, Pennsylvania. Warm-up starts at 8 a.m. and the four teams compete at 9. Sunday, the individual tournament opens with doubles play first at 8 a.m.

            Please direct any questions about the tournament or the tennis season to Head Coach Dan Sullivan, dsullivan@wells.edu.









 
Bid Farewell to Wells’ Class of 2013!
            Adorned in black robes and tassels, the Wells College Class of 2013 will say goodbye to the sunny shores of Cayuga Lake and the hilly bubble of Aurora on May 18.
            Each year, the College invites a renowned scholar or alum to speak at the Commencement ceremony. Dr. Margaret A. Pericak-Vance, Class of 1973, will speak this year. She hails from the University of Miami, where she heads the John P. Hussman Institute for Human Genomics.
            The seniors are not the only people who witness the end of a Wells chapter this year – Lisa Ryerson, the 19-year President of Wells College, will retire at the end of the academic year. Commencement serves as farewell to her as much as it is a farewell to the seniors.
The traditional carriage rides begin at 7 a.m. in front of Main Building, and the ceremony will begin behind the Aurora Inn promptly at 10 a.m.
Inclement weather may force the College to move the graduation to Phipps Auditorium, in Macmillian Hall. The ceremony will be broadcasted in the Art Exhibit Room, also in Macmillian Hall.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Recent Alum Returns to Wells
            Janis Esch, Class of 2010, found herself in Wells’ hallowed halls once again.
            The poet/singer/songwriter – currently based in Southern Illinois – returned to campus on April 17 to read selections from her work entitled, “Where Longing Is.” The text was originally her senior thesis, and of “such quality,” according to Professor Bruce Bennett, that the English Department and the Book Arts Center deemed it worthy of publication.
             “Where Longing Is” represents Esch’s time in California and her time at Wells, and is very much a collection of memories and a look into identity. The chapbook is short, but captivating.
Esch appeared in various classes throughout the day and gave a reading of her work at 7:30 p.m. in the Art Exhibit Room. Her workshops allowed students an insight into what it takes to be a poet, as well as life after Wells. She guided students and professors alike to new poets, ideas, and discoveries.
The chapbook is available through the Wells College Book Arts Center. For more information, please contact Bruce Bennett, brbennett@wells.edu.


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San Francisco One Nightly News

 

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CAITLYN [On-cam]
Good evening. I’m Caitlyn Copfer... and this is San Francisco One.
Our top story tonight...Captain Guy Kleess’s pilot license has been suspended following an investigation of his ship’s collision with the Bay Bridge on January 7th…the Overseas Reymar tanker collided with the Echo tower. This is the second ship-bridge crash in five years.
 
The state Board of Pilot Commissioners reports that Kleess miscalculated the distance between the towers and failed to communicate with ship personnel. The board will take him to trial.
Hillary?
HILLARY [On-cam]
In national news, Congress passed a new bill that may make you want to reconsider what you make for dinner.
The Farmer Assurance Provision... more commonly known as the Monsanto Protection Act... came into effect on March 26th. This bill protects the biotech industry... allowing the planting and selling of potentially harmful genetically modified seeds despite consumer concerns.
The bill will remain in effect until September 30th 2013 at end of the fiscal year.
Jillian?
JILLIAN [On-cam]
Thank you, Hillary.
A federal judge ruled that the morning after pill now be made available to all ages without a prescription... The ruling overturns the 2011 decision by Health and Human Services Secretary Kathleen Sebelius that required a prescription for girls under 17.
The new legislation will make Plan B available over the counter as early as May.
And now to Judy with a local sports update.
JUDY [On-cam]
Thank you, Jillian.
It was a big day for the San Francisco Giants... who celebrated their 2012 season in a World Series banner hanging ceremony earlier today.
This before their home opener against the St. Louis Cardinals... who they defeated in a one-and-oh victory.
 
As if that wasn’t enough of a treat, sports fans caught a glimpse of a very special sight in the game’s first inning.
RAINBOW CLIP: Runs 5
 Not one but two rainbows could be seen over A-T-and-T Park... an omen fans hope will forecast another victory for the twice-winning franchise.
Judy [On-cam]
For San Francisco One, I’m Judy Lavelle... we’ll be back after a short commercial break.

 

Editorial


Group Editorial

 

Kids and Ketamine Don’t Mix

 

March 27, 2013

 

Psychiatrist Demitri Papolos boasts a new and unlikely treatment that could help children affected by a type of bipolar disorder he calls, “the fear of harm profile.” Even though diagnosing bipolar disorder in children is still controversial in the psychiatry community, the Manhattan doctor has gone a step beyond diagnosis by prescribing 12 children—ages six to 19—ketamine, a sedative better known as the club drug “Special K.”

 

Can ketamine effectively relieve fearfulness in suffering children? Papolos’s preliminary research looks promising. Should doctors give the class III controlled substance to children as young as six? We’re skeptical at best.

 

Papolos and other proponents will argue that ketamine’s sketchy reputation as a choice recreational horse tranquilizer overshadows its potential therapeutic effects. In some ways, that’s true. Ketamine has long been regarded as the optimal sedative for young patients—even infants—during dental procedures, surgery, and distressing emergency room visits. The one thing these uses all have in common? These situations usually arise only once or twice in a person’s childhood. Papolos’s patients receive a dose of the drug every day.

 

Proponents of the ketamine treatment fail to address the very possibility that should terrify parents—that children may suffer the same long-term exposure side effects as the drug’s recreational abusers. In fact, their relatively fragile developing bodies could be in for a lot worse.

 

Substance abuse researchers at the University of Maryland identify flashbacks, amnesia, and a wide range of debilitating muscle symptoms as common side effects of consistent ketamine use. Even in Papolos’s study, a brief report published last August in the Journal of Affective Disorders, he reported that a quarter of his patients “experienced memory problems” after taking ketamine for five months. Considering a staggering 67 percent of the children also experienced a “loss of balance,” these symptoms suggest that we just don’t know if children’s changing bodies will tolerate this treatment. If these side effects continue to mirror those of seasoned users, the consequences could be devastating.

 

Nonetheless, we cannot ignore Papolos’s success in quelling symptoms of bipolar disorder. Some families regard the treatment as a godsend—a last resort solution, but one that has drastically changed their child’s explosive behavior. A recent NPR story profiled 22-year-old George McCann. One of Papolos’s patients, McCann’s prescription use of ketamine has been the only fully satisfying treatment for the severe psychiatric symptoms that affected him since early childhood. Despite his satisfaction with Papolos’s treatment, McCann’s case does not represent the whole, worrisome story. McCann is an adult and can make his own informed decisions about his health care. On a more physical level, at 22, patients like McCann have bypassed the growth spurts and early learning opportunities that ketamine side-effects could endanger in younger children.

 

The dilemma of alleviating psychiatric symptoms at the price of physical health is a complicated one. No one envies the difficult choices parents of psychiatrically ill young children must make. But like any other medical treatment, doctors, patients, and families must consider the risks. Until the drug is further vetted for safety in young children, doctors should exhaust all other options—from more tried and true pharmaceuticals to holistic therapies. Because no matter how promising the results, a drug like ketamine may not be worth the possibility of physical and mental anguish later on.

 

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